Saturday, May 22, 2010

What do you think? [song thingy]?

i luv to write songs i wrote about 12.is there anyway to get them like..published?heres an exampleof one





Sweet September,


Then November


Still remember


not surrender


long gone summer


snow's a bummer


no long slumber


another month,


another number





snow is falling to the ground,


and u never come around


ur lov changes like the seasons;


different girls for different reasons


I'd want u to come and stay,


cuz boy I'm just a call away.


the weather now is getting cold,


my lov for u is way too old.


chorus


January, February, March, April


my lov for u still is stable


May, June, July, August, September


all our times I still remember


Come to me in any year


I'll alway be here my dear


But now it is getting cold


my want for u is way too old


chorus


babii come close to me,


i just want u to see


that this is more than fantasy


no way more than fantasy


andnow im feelin really low


theres just one thing to be told


the weather now is gettingcold


mywant4 u is just fools gold

What do you think? [song thingy]?
well your songs are like poems not songs but you can make a poem book and get it published
Reply:good song like the lyrics but i could not resite them good with no beat but still good song
Reply:Ya know what... those are actually good compared to some songs ive seen on here. good job man.
Reply:IT IS THE BEST
Reply:You're very talented.


Best of luck!
Reply:W0W ur realy good


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