What think you of this 'goodnight' poem?

Balloons on strings,


Sailing, bouncing June


Into July kites skimming


Tails like afternoon





Mosquito hawks on quiet


Water. There! The butterfly


Making its rounds of


Moonflowers' snow petals





Enticing emerald hummingbirds,


Giant moths soundlessly


Fluttering topaz and ruby


Wings. Again! The butterfly





Dips, bobs angel-blue wings.


Balloons, kites, put away


For the night. Hummingbirds,


Butterflies vanish....





There is peace....

What think you of this 'goodnight' poem?
beautiful. I love hummingbirds.
Reply:Transports one into a peaceful sleep.





Only in real life mosquitos trouble me and my sleep these days!





Good night!
Reply:I like it and thought it had lots of rhythm of gentleness, going from the afternoon into the night--I loved it!
Reply:Loved it.


Like butterflies and hummingbirds who vanish in the night


I'll bid you a sound sleep, so you're eager for the morning light.
Reply:That would be a lovely sight to behold.
Reply:it reminds me of a summer day


for the first 4 verses, then for the


rest, it reminded me of a


summer afternoon :)


it's not really a 'goodnight' poem


for me :) but it's still very good


and peaceful.
Reply:its pretty good
Reply:A beautiful day becoming a peaceful night. What more could anyone ask for ...
Reply:that is the best of peace
Reply:Thet's jes so purdy.


If'n I warn't spoke fer, I'd ahavta be adoin' some speakin' of mah own.


edit:


Pssst.... How'd you get in the backyard of mansion # 11?
Reply:Wonderful as usual especially the end " PEACE "
Reply:Hey !! hey !! hey......





That's really good....


...you're on a roll now....


You go girl...


Very good.


I liked it very much...


he he he..now you got my imagination soarin...
Reply:pretty gud :]
Reply:its gets a little awkward after the first stanza, like the rhythm doesnt match . But i like the first stanza





Please comment on my poem its nearby!!
Reply:It's pretty and reminds me of the 4th of July
Reply:Great poem!
Reply:so baetiful this night.
Reply:As a child, I often dreamed of flying. Everything in this poem flies and soars, as does the poem itself. I will picture this poem tonight and perhaps I will actually sleep.